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take me home
when you want me
this will be my
last resistance
and you will be my
anesthesia
so i won't feel any pain

pinch my cheeks
so i can fake a smile
i am tired of being sober
and unwell when i'm clean
with stars freckled
is my delirium
so bright that it is blinding

waste my time
is makes no difference
whether i waste it
on my own
or close to you
my lethargy
i hope we'll rot in peace

fuck me hard
and lick my sweat
scratch my back
when you feel love
and sigh into my ear
nymphomaniac
your skin and flesh are mine
©2004-2010 ~zerotonine
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:iconkiri529:
The picture is a nice idea
:iconzerotonine:
thank you.
you should comment on the poem, not the picture! :D
no, just kidding ;)
thanks again

--
the artist is the creator of beautiful things.
Oscar Wilde.
:iconzerotonine:
Hey, you're from germany? O_o
Woher kommst du denn genau?

--
the artist is the creator of beautiful things.
Oscar Wilde.
:iconkiri529:
Aus der Umgebung von Stuttgart. Und du?
:iconzerotonine:
stuttgart, die CL-Luschen :D
aus bergkamen, nahe dortmund
muss mir gleich mal deine gallerie ansehen. :)
wie heißt du?

--
the artist is the creator of beautiful things.
Oscar Wilde.
:iconkiri529:
Hoffe dass sie dir gefällt.
Mein Name steht direkt unter meinem Nick. Ich heiß Argiri. Das ist griechisch :)
:icongypsyend0rphin:
I really, really love this... something about it appealed to me so much. Just the way you've worded it... it all seems so numb (hence the anesthesia I guess). The last stanza was great... it was all just great!

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:iconzerotonine:
:omg:
whoa, thank you so much! escpecially for the +fav!
this means soooo much to me :love:
thanks thanks thanks! :hug: :heart: :)

--
the artist is the creator of beautiful things.
Oscar Wilde.

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